Band 4 – 19 / A I’m really impressed by the amount of effort that you have put into your first unit. You have used your time wisely to show the research that you have carried out. Planning and research evidence is complete and detailed; There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience (especially now that you’ve explained the results of the questionnaire and the effect this had on your decisions.) There is excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props; There is excellent work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding. There are some areas of the blog that will need a comment to explain why you have posted certain images – what do they show? How have they aided your planning and research? There is an excellent level of care in the presentation of the research and planning; Time management is excellent.
The font colour should not be black - I can't read it!
ReplyDeleteBand 4 – 19 / A
ReplyDeleteI’m really impressed by the amount of effort that you have put into your first unit. You have used your time wisely to show the research that you have carried out.
Planning and research evidence is complete and detailed;
There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience (especially now that you’ve explained the results of the questionnaire and the effect this had on your decisions.)
There is excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props;
There is excellent work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding. There are some areas of the blog that will need a comment to explain why you have posted certain images – what do they show? How have they aided your planning and research?
There is an excellent level of care in the presentation of the research and planning;
Time management is excellent.
Please change the font!!!
ReplyDeleteYou need to show that you have some peer evaluations of your production - what went well? What could you improve?
Excellent planning and research skills overall.